I definitely think the reworked one is a huge improvement from the original. I'm having trouble with the legs because in the original figure drawing I did with marker there were so many marks. I plan on further working on the hands, especially the right one and rendering the legs further.

I'm still working on this piece. I really like the way the top face is coming out. The bottom two pieces definitely need to be worked on more. I tried to extend the hair of the top face to take up some of the negative space. Any other suggestions for negative space?

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